Talk:Arche Eeb Rile Furt/@comment-190.182.177.229-20150927015219/@comment-96.246.99.175-20150927030722

...... I don't understand how your scenario is dark. that sounds more comedic if anything. Creating good characters that garner pity and feels, and then killing them is a dark story tactic 101. Nevermind ripping the girl to pieces, with each bit used in ways that you wouldn't want to happen to yourself is plenty dark I'd say. However, if you were saying your scenario out of sarcasm, it gave me a buzz cut and feel free to ignore this comment.