Thread:Ducmq/@comment-22439-20150817195514/@comment-26501532-20150818141045

Thought some parts of the summary that were rewritten were fine and were actually better. But some of the redited parts have errors, such as

-titanic black blob (awkward desciption)

-Traumatized Anoch (Anoch was not traumatized)

-Degree written as degre (addtional word errors after their edits.)

-This was due to Ainz thinking that the empire's army had just a small touch a small scale of his true power. (Nothing of this was said in the novel)

-Dark Young started rushing towards the army, like doom itself. (Addtional unnecessary description)

-The monsters bulldoze through the retreating army's flank. (the army was not retreating that time)

- Villagers to helpless villagers  (Since this is just a summary, additional desciptions were uneeded since the summary is going to be shortern soon. )

-etc

