User blog comment:Zack Tan/Volume 7 Intermission/@comment-26951739-20150903130342

"In the past, when Chain was journeying with granny's group, was through controlling the armor remotely."

There is an "it" missing - "..., it was through..." OR

"...,it was by controlling the armor remotely."

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"Sigh, even if you are right to say that.....but, I am surprised that you can convince that kid to be an adventurer."

Evileye is an andventurer since some time, so this should be past tense.

"...that you could have convinced that kid..." OR

"that you could have been able to convince the kid..."

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""Mah, since her other comrades will support her and she is also knowledge about undeads well,..."

"...and she has also knowledge..."

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"The granny then shifted her sight towards the platinum armor, thinking that she would reply him easily."

"...that she would disagree with him."

I´ll edit here if i should find more.

PS: That´s all i found.

THX for the translation!