Thread:Nomad27/@comment-37585706-20191126153050

Why did you revert the edits I made on the soul page?

“Instead, it will leave the bodies, continuing to linger on in the location where they have ended up dying at.”

You shouldn't end a sentence with a preposition, so it should read: "Instead, it will leave the bodies, continuing to linger on in the location where they had ended up dying.”

https://www.grammarly.com/blog/youve-been-lied-to-heres-why-you-absolutely-can-end-a-sentence-with-a-preposition/

“A fleshy human body for instance,...”

For instance requires a comma before and after the for instance so the sentence should start "A fleshy human body, for instance,..."

https://data.grammarbook.com/blog/commas/commas-part-10/

“In accordance to the Re-Estize Kingdom's education teachings of divine magic,...”

Should be “In accordance with the Re-Estize Kingdom's education teachings of divine magic,...”

https://www.btb.termiumplus.gc.ca/tpv2guides/guides/wrtps/index-eng.html?lang=eng&lettr=indx_catlog_a&page=9g3frFBsvfN0.html

“Destroying a skeletal corpse that lack its original flesh and blood,...”

This should be “Destroying a skeletal corpse that lacks its original flesh and blood,...”

http://elss.elc.cityu.edu.hk/ELSS/Resource/Commonly%20Misused%20Words%20(Lack)/

“In others words,...”

This should be “In other words,...” because that is how it is written, in others words doesn’t even make sense.

https://www.dictionary.com/browse/in-other-words

“...their soul will depart from the body which in turn later gets swallow up by a world of invisible darkness…”

This should be “...their soul will depart from the body which in turn later gets swallowed up by a world of invisible darkness...:”

https://www.macmillandictionary.com/us/dictionary/american/swallow-up

“...9th tier spell can invalidate such revival process from happening…”

“...9th tier spell can invalidate such a revival process from happening…” I’m not even going to explain this one.

And it goes on, this Wiki has a lot of errors.  