Talk:Black Scripture/@comment-49.207.143.208-20160614132153/@comment-26930675-20160614231124

I personally didn't like this fan fic, there were way too many ridiculous power-ups for the BS members, especially the captain and Zesshi...

For example, the writer clearly stated at one point that Zesshi was at her maximum and couldn't even scratch a floor guardian and know what? The next moment the writer said that in fact she didn't use her "full" power... Seriously I almost screamed behind my PC at this :D, a big problem in continuity if you ask me.

The worst was the captain...