Talk:Arche Eeb Rile Furt/@comment-30222207-20170122094052

So, is the whole whole Arche dying and her sisters being sold into slavery and also dying impactful to the plot, or did the author just add that in there to be an edgelord? I don't mind death and tragedy if it's part of character or world building, but if you throw it in as a cheap bid to tug on someone's heartstrings, that's usually a sign of bad writing. The series already has Deus Ex out the ass and a complete lack of any meaningful enemy or real goals, so if the author is gonna throw stuff like that in there too, then my hopes for this story getting good are pretty much out the window.